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Comment on Proof Reading Exercise by Kurt

Kurt — Thu, 17 Nov 2011 05:26:53 +0000

As I turned the car towards the mountains I said, “I don’t know what to do.” He just looked out his window, then spoke out, “we’ll work it out when the time comes.” After he had pulled the car over to the side of the road, he got out, and said, “just keep driving, just be careful, and don’t trust anyone.” I know that he thought that it was good advice, but it didn’t make me feel any better; I drove on.

While I was driving, he was making more calls and telling the others where I was. Barry would be especially interested and I knew that. I figured that he would do it, I drove faster it was way too fast, and way over the limit.

As I approached the city, I had this feeling that I had arrived to late. I could see the flames coming from the house, I could hear the distant sirens and I knew that this was not good news. Because of the smoke, I couldn’t see the peoples faces. I searched for them all the same, they must be in there somewhere.

“Barry” I called out, he turned and smiled. I knew everything would be okay, and then the house exploded!

Comment on Year 11 English: Term 4, Week 2 by Mr O'Meara

Mr O'Meara — Sun, 16 Oct 2011 10:34:37 +0000

I think that it would be best if you helped Taylor, because it will be much easier to do the essay once that resource is finished.

Comment on Year 11 English: Term 4, Week 2 by jamie-lee wallis

jamie-lee wallis — Sun, 16 Oct 2011 09:33:21 +0000

hey O’Meara,
just wondering what I will be doing in class because ive finished the work. Do I help taylor or can i start on a rough draft of a family essay?

Comment on Year 11 English: Montana 1948 Questions by Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Last Week of Term

Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Last Week of Term — Sat, 17 Sep 2011 05:02:57 +0000

[...] During this time, you should finished reading Montana 1948 and answering those twelve questions that I left you with. [...]

Comment on Year 11 English: Montana 1948 Questions by Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Term 3, Week 9

Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Term 3, Week 9 — Sun, 11 Sep 2011 10:15:54 +0000

[...] will be finishing your presentations and others of you will be either reading Montana 1948 or doing the dozen comprehension questions. Remember, these are not quick questions. They are designed to help you genuinely comprehend this [...]

Comment on Year 11 English: Montana 1948 Questions by Hannah O'Meara

Hannah O'Meara — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 01:51:47 +0000

Okey Dokey

Comment on Year 11 English: Montana 1948 Questions by Mr O'Meara

Mr O'Meara — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 01:49:44 +0000

By the start of next term.

Comment on Year 11 English: Montana 1948 Questions by Hannah O'Meara

Hannah O'Meara — Fri, 09 Sep 2011 01:13:16 +0000

When is this due?

Comment on Year 11 English: Macbeth Sample Essay by Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Term 3, Week 7

Red Space Rocket » Year 11 English: Term 3, Week 7 — Sun, 28 Aug 2011 00:39:00 +0000

[...] refresh your memory about writing expository essays, I have provided an example essay about Macbeth. First thing Monday, you will be working with an electronic copy of this text and highlighting [...]

Comment on Year 12 English: Topic Sentences in Your Cosi Response by Suzanna

Suzanna — Fri, 26 Aug 2011 06:23:45 +0000

I’m a Yr 12 teacher in Warrnambool. I justed wanted to say thanks for posting this – it’s fantastic and really helpful!

Cheers
Suzi

Comment on Year 11 English: Reply to the Prosecution by Mr O'Meara

Mr O'Meara — Sat, 13 Aug 2011 08:53:42 +0000

No worries.

Comment on Proof Reading Exercise by Karissa

Karissa — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 20:34:26 +0000

As I turned the car towards the mountains I said, “I don’t know what to do,” and he just looked out his window and then he spoke, “We’ll work it out when the time comes.” After he had pulled the car over to the side of the road, he got out, and said, “Just keep driving, just be careful, and don’t trust anyone” I know that he thought this was good advice but it didn’t make me feel any better; I drove on.

While I was driving he was making more calls and he was telling the others where I was. Barry would be especially interested that I knew that. I figured that he would do this, I drove faster and I drove way too fast, way over the limit.

As I approached the city, I had this feeling that i had arrived too late. I could see the flames coming from the house, I could hear the distant sirens and I knew that this was not good news. Because of the smoke, I couldn’t see peoples’ faces but I searched for him all the same. He must be in there someone.

“Barry,” I called out. He turned and smiled and I knew everything would be okay, and then the house exploded.

Comment on Creation Stories by Red Space Rocket » Language and Technology: Week 9

Red Space Rocket » Language and Technology: Week 9 — Fri, 01 Apr 2011 20:07:26 +0000

[...] Starting in the classroom, you will write and plan your talk about the creation story that you have been researching. In the second half of the session, we have access to a computer room where you will be able to actually construct your presentation. Remember, use few words and big, striking images. Here are the details for this task. [...]

Comment on Getting Ready for The Generals Assessment by Hannah

Hannah — Wed, 30 Mar 2011 02:28:22 +0000

Alright, thanks.

Comment on Getting Ready for The Generals Assessment by Mr O'Meara

Mr O'Meara — Wed, 30 Mar 2011 02:18:13 +0000

I wouldn’t use any quotation twice in an essay. It wouldn’t lose you marks, but it wouldn’t gain you any, either.