Master Class: Friday

3 09 2010

The lawyer’s acumen meant that the rowdy robber was acquitted by the jury.

Rewrite this sentence. This time you can only use “that”, “by” and “the”. The rest must be different words. Again, just in case you have forgotten, the aim is to make your sentence really sing.


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3 responses to “Master Class: Friday”

3 09 2010
Travis (22:03:27) :

The barrister’s quick judgement cause the theif, who had a reputation for being disruptive, to be allowed to leave by the court.

8 09 2010
Ana (12:08:45) :

The attorney’s sharpness intended that the disorderly thief was exculpated by the tribunal.

8 09 2010
Mr O'Meara (12:51:44) :

Pretty good, Ana, but I am not sure about intended as showing causation. Can you have another crack at it with a new word there?

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