Red Space Rocket

I have been marking a massive pile of stories from my year ten English classes and I thought I’d share some thoughts.

Most stories so far have a really good solid story. The events lead somewhere and there is some kind of mystery or journey happening. This is good to see.

Everyone uses dialogue in their stories which is effective. Some people use it really well to expand character and add life to events.

Many stories contained identifiable and clear characters. There are good guys and bad guys and characters who seem to be one but behave like another. Generally there is still room to improve here but people are getting the idea.

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